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ok i am sorry i am writing the raven by hand and will update with three or more days just give me time ok
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Day 5: THE SILENT TREATMENT
The sun only just rising over the horizon peeks out and casts a golden glow on the world. sunlight comes in through a window and shines on a figure laying on the hard bright wooden floors remaining motionless. next to the figure a girl seemingly younger sits waiting. All the sudden ravens eyes slowly open and look over at the girl.
A long stareing contest seems to take place as Raven inspects the girl. She is a little pale with long black hair, and seems pretty well figured. Her eyes seem to be jet black pearls waching the lone figure.
sudenly the girl puts her hand on ravens forehead and says "how are you feeling?". Raven then slightly confused sais "im fine...who are you?". The girl then gets up revealing a slim figure hearing a long sweater a skirt and stockings. "you dont remember me?" the girl says with a slightly sad tone. "well i guess it was pretty extensive huh? to tell the truth hun, you used to love me.". The girl then climbed on top of him and bent down and kissed him. Raven looked up with utter confusion and asked again "who are you?". The girl looked down and then with a soft light voice said "well...there isnt any fun in telling you who i am if you cant remember.". With that wern stuck her tongue out at raven and folded her arms together and seemed to pout. Just then Ravens eyes struck wide open and he reached up and rans his fingers through her hair and then sat up and kissed her saying "Im sorry i could never forget about my little angel". Then the girl laid down hugging his arm saying "its about time but now that means you get the silent treatment". The girl then smiled and nestled her head into ravens arm. Raven then got up and said "Awe thats not fair. You know its not my fault.". then as raven said this the girl said "you should get some more rest.". Raven then said "ok but dun do anythin to me in my sleep Wern.". giving a slight giggle she said "im not making any promises...".
Day 4: the girl
waking up raven sees he is now in a very dark room on a bed. as he gets up he notices something. Next to him there is another figure. This person is only a slight bit smaller and seems to be a girl. as Raven gets up he struggles then falls back again. Something is tremendously wrong, but he does not know what. The girl next to him finally gets up and notices him trying to move. The girl then whispers "you shouldnt try to move like that, it is only making you weaker." Raven unable to comprehend takes all of his streangth and finally surges with all of his force to his feet. The girl then startled gets up. Two wings spread from ravens back. Black and full of feathers. Suddenly Ravens eyes glow read and an eerie silence takes place. Then as if all energy was gone raven collapses to the ground, now weaker than before. The girl goes over to him and helps him back to the bed. She then gives him a light kiss with a single word "remember..."
done: doom guy B.F.G.
this is the final version lol hope ya like it
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my warhammer conversions. lol some were DAMN hard to make...so be nice
day three is before this post, look back if u have to...
day 3: here?
Walking down orchard Walking down orchard road, midnight. Drunk, happy, exotic, extreme, innocent. Raven looking up at the moon sat there pensive as usual. Sitting on top of the tallest building, just laying down looking at the stars. The world seems so quiet from so high, the stars shining bright. As Raven looks up suddenly the scene around him changes and he is on a park bench with a girl, sitting in the snow falling softly. Then Raven turns to look at the face of the girl next to him but as he tries Raven is back at Orchard road on the roof. He looks down, and a single tear falls.
road he see’s the people around him, so content with their own lives they wouldn’t think of looking at anyone else. Twisting and turning he walks aimlessly, still thinking, always thinking. Finally a dead end, but not enough. Raven turns around and walks down the alleyway he ventured into.
Now as pensive as ever Raven with a whisper says “Why am I here?”. As Raven says these words the world around him becomes dark, and all light is gone. Raven collapses into oblivion, seeming never to return.
day 2: lost
Wandering around the city Raven hears the humming of people left and right and motors roaring down the road. A bell goes off, marking eight rings. Still early in the day the sun is still only just touching the city of Singapore. As Raven starts to walk he starts to notice a mark on his arm. The mark is a pulsating red glow on the back of Ravens wrist. The mark then makes him notice his attire, a patients outfit in a hospital that reveals almost all skin on his body. Rushing into the nearest clothing store raven emerges from the store wearing black baggy pants, a white long sleeve shirt with a black shirt over it.
Now being only noted once in a while he walks down a very busy road several lanes wide. The sign next to him read “Orchard rd”. As he kept walking he found himself accidentally bumping into a short kid that screwed “Shit man watch out!”. Raven got up and said “I’m sorry, could you help me out, I think im lost. Where am I?”. Looking almost stupefied by the question the boy said “Your at Orchard Road!”. Then Raven with a slight tension said “im not stupid, I mean to ask what city is this?”. Then the guy said “Dude are you stupid! You are in Singapore.”. After a few short seconds Raven said “Oh well my name is Rrrav….I mean Ben.”. The other guy turned and said “ok my name is louis, you like apple?”. Almost the most random question to be asked Raven said “Yah they taste really good, especially the green ones.”. Louis then with a face that is best described by the word Gah Said “I mean the computers!!!”. Thinking quickly Ravens face turned into complete puzzlement then said “There is an apple that is called computer?”. Louis then holding his rage in said “Follow me please…”.
Walking down orchard road Louis weaved in and out of the crowds until finally reaching a building with a large teepee shaped glass entrance. When we got inside there were escalators and a big bookstore behind them. On the way up the escalators Raven commented “Where are we going?”. Then louis pointed at a store with a logo similar to an apple, and inside was all sorts of electronic devices. Louis then with a relieving tension said “this is what apple is.”. Looking confused Raven started to look around till something caught his eye. A silver laptop with the apple logo was on display just sitting there. Raven then closed his eyes for a moment, then said to louis “ok lets go.”. On their way out louis looked over to see raven with a bag slung around to his side. Louis then noticed something and said “So you got a Mac? I told you they were good.”.
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ok well thats part two...any feedback will be welcome thanks ^^
my warhammer conversions. lol some were DAMN hard to make...so be nice
